Damn... A good flow, a nice piece! That desire to be noticed by that one that shakes your heart. Beautifully written Luke :)

Dang!!! Dude, you took me back to high
school trying to get a girl to notice me by
hang with guys she liked. Thank you for
sharing this most excellent read indeed. Great job and Write On,
Bogie

^_^ I love your writing Luke!!!! If I don't comment on every poem know that I at least read and love them :) Keep smiling, keep writing!

Another good 1!! 5/5
xxKaylaXX

WOW!!! luke! first i have to say bravo!!! this is an amazing poem. my boyfriends name is luke and i fall in love at his call all the time. he's amazing but this is a great poem! i love it! 5/5
Love: ANgelita
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