Magic in a HeartBeat

by Dark Kitten   Mar 27, 2006


When the breeze whispers through the trees,
You know it's magic,
You can feel the hum of life everywhere,
Exhilarating, passionate, even somewhat frantic,

When the earth shivers beneath your feet,
You know it's magic,
Hauntingly familiar and overwhelming,
Peaceful, aching, even somewhat manic,

When the stars twinkle in the night sky,
You know it's magic,
There for you and no one else,
Welcoming, brilliant, ever dramatic,

When you feel like your being watched but you can't see it,
You know it's magic,
A fairie passing by,
A guardian, knowing, ever watchful, dynamic,

When the fireflies dance amongst the trees,
You know it's magic,
A playful seen left as to grace only you,
Heartwarming, comforting, beatific,

When all is quiet and no one's there,
And the world is asleep except for the wake of your feet,
All is calm, and so beautiful,
You have to know that's magic......
In a heartbeat...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    This is an awesome poem. I wish I could give you a rating higher than 5, because this poem deserves it. My favorite stanza:
    "When you feel like your being watched but you can't see it,
    You know it's magic,
    A fairie passing by,
    A guardian, knowing, ever watchful, dynamic"

    I like the idea you presented there, it's something not said or thought about all the time. Definitely a unique poem. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Moose

    Very Natury. Calming to say the least. I enjoyed it, made me relax a little as I read it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    ^^^ ya i completly agree with MY1&only.. i love it...

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    Wonderful i love it it is awesome

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Interesting, I liked the rhyme and there was a careful choice of words, I felt it lacked momentum though. Nice Poetry...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]