Comments : Magic in a HeartBeat

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    You amazingly captured the beauty of true nature here, it really does seem magic.
    When I think of the industrial land we live in it just makes this poem magic =]

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Interesting, I liked the rhyme and there was a careful choice of words, I felt it lacked momentum though. Nice Poetry...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    Wonderful i love it it is awesome

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    ^^^ ya i completly agree with MY1&only.. i love it...

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Moose

    Very Natury. Calming to say the least. I enjoyed it, made me relax a little as I read it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    This is an awesome poem. I wish I could give you a rating higher than 5, because this poem deserves it. My favorite stanza:
    "When you feel like your being watched but you can't see it,
    You know it's magic,
    A fairie passing by,
    A guardian, knowing, ever watchful, dynamic"

    I like the idea you presented there, it's something not said or thought about all the time. Definitely a unique poem. Great job.