Nice way to express how different people feel.. |
You have an amazing way of putting your words together the way you do and getting straight to the point....DO NOT toss this poem out...keep it!! You are honestly right, too many people take life itself for granted.....Keep up the Great work girl....you really have something going for you in your future!! |
by StephanieH
Wow.. This is actually a great poem, very well written and very unique, I usually read poems that ryhme, but this is still great. |
by Princess
I like this poem and u shouldnt toss any poem that u write cuz if it came from u u should love it no matter wat any one says in my opinion this poem is wat u think and thats great |
by Chelssღ
This is a super good poem!!=)...Keep writing...you have a talent!=)...Check out some of my stuff!=) |
by McGeek
That is one of the greatest poems i have ever read..and it's soo true..i give you a 5! |