by Chelsey Mar 27, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
That beautiful pink dress |
by BlueJay
Oh wow. this poem is amazing. I think you have done an excellent job. I am able to see this story unfold in front of me. I can feel the emotion of the poor girl, and it is amazingly done. This piece is vivid and has a personal touch though it is a common story. 5/5 |
The title caught my eye and I was stunned that such a wonderful piece could unfold from an already eye-catching title! A delightful read indeed (: I love the last verse, how you connect tiara confessions with prom/ball/dance was amazing. 5/5! |
by Cassie Cain
Great poem, keep up the good work! |
This is really good! Keep it up! Try to check out some of my poems, like my newest "Illusion". Or my fave "Lonely Girl"! |
by Mistake
This is good !! I like it. We all feel like we can always have better now && then. 5/5 ! |