by Simon Hayes
Damn this is a wonderful write! So deep, heart breaking and beautiful at the same time. Ending was great as Sunny pointed out ! :) |
by Kim
I adored it! The ending was amazing, hell the whole poem was amazing! So sad and beautiful! |
by Luke
Woah! Great Title, And A wonderfully And Beautifully Written Poem! |
by Angie
WOW, just goes to show, we should never be made to do what others want us to do.... you must always follow your own heart, follow your own dreams.... A heartfelt and beautiful write. Don't you just love the titles Sunny comes up with???? She's given many to me as well. Love the write Chelz..... |
by Darien
Hahaha awesome poem!.. ohh I especially loved the titile.. oops! Sunny thought of it :P hehe jks!! |
by Kylie
Ahh, wow. I really love the last 2 stanzas! ...splendid poem =) |
by Mistake
This is good !! I like it. We all feel like we can always have better now && then. 5/5 ! |
This is really good! Keep it up! Try to check out some of my poems, like my newest "Illusion". Or my fave "Lonely Girl"! |
by Cassie Cain
Great poem, keep up the good work! |
The title caught my eye and I was stunned that such a wonderful piece could unfold from an already eye-catching title! A delightful read indeed (: I love the last verse, how you connect tiara confessions with prom/ball/dance was amazing. 5/5! |
by BlueJay
Oh wow. this poem is amazing. I think you have done an excellent job. I am able to see this story unfold in front of me. I can feel the emotion of the poor girl, and it is amazingly done. This piece is vivid and has a personal touch though it is a common story. 5/5 |