No its not bad. in fact its realli nice. I loved it so much!!!
keep it up

I really love this one! Can totally relate to it! I love the line "I've fallen in love with your eyes"

Beautifully written a t0uching piece. keep it up

I like it; girl don't say nuthins whack cuz I think that it was great.

Beautiful poem, sweet and lovely, wonderful penn!!!

This is not a bad poem its really good. I like it alot!

Whack??? no no no... a beautiful, pretty little poem. surely a masterpiece of a young girl's love. i know you incorporate beautiful feelings everytime you write. a timeless piece of poetry as usual. i give you a butterfly kiss!

Enjoyed, lovely poem RC.

What do you mean wack? i think its very nice 5/5