Hey, it's been a while. I really oike the way you wrote this [poem, it was like one big metaphore...and metaphores rock =D check out my new poem if you have the time. L8a
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I no we already discussed dis 1 but I thougth I'd leave my comments 2day Neway, altho I still think it's a gr8 poem and so dat opinion aint changed. Like I sed last nite/dis mornin it is a beautifully tragic poem, and the bird imagery/metaphor is brilliant (especially cs ov da book Im readin- i found it especially emotive) and it is essentially wonderfully written and full of depth.
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Really deep and heart wrenching poem man seriously. the bird represents something u love and care about and fir wateva reason u shut it out and now ur sorry, thats my interpretation of this poem. its short and sweet.