Very good poem its relly good.

Very good peice, writen well and holding attention thoughout

Ok to start off i am pretty sure that "back wards" should be one word
secondly, i thought that this poem's third stanza was amazing
lastly, the whole time i was reading this poem, i had memories of similar nightmares which is cool because you did such a good job with the description that i could easily image everything and relate