Angel

by .+*Jess*+.   Mar 27, 2006


Your amazing and powerful wings
Your soft body
Untouched by human hands
Your eyes
Which had never met mine
Your heart
Containing so many secrets
Your brain
So powerful and smart
You carry a sweet smell
That hypnotizes me
You scare me
Because I know you
From somewhere
And I've fallen in love with you
Many times
You've left
Many times
And you came back
Many times

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  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    This is alright. My favorite lines are these:

    "You carry a sweet smell
    That hypnotizes me"

    However I think it is a little cliche to say a body part and why you like it. Also you dont use alot of strong adjectives (smart can be intelligent or clever....) so I don't get the feeling that I can REALLY see the person you are describing. Lastly try to keep the same tense throughout the poem
    "Which had never met mine" should be which have never met mine, to be consistent. Just a few suggestions.

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