I thought this was a wicked poem keep it up 5/5

Good job on the poem the rhyming was good I loved the last two lines that ended it nicely. In the fourth line I think it would flow better if you had "cannot" instead of "can't" in the sixth line from the bottom I think "into the mirror" would also smooth out the flow. Other than that very good job

Fantastic poem very well writtin keep writing hun and take care sarah x

Wow, this poem is amazing...I can't believe you're only 13. You have awesome talent to be that young! I'm definately adding you to my favs...and thanks for your comment on my poem btw!

Great poem. I love the whole feel of it and all the emotions put into it. I know from experience how hard it is to write about that kind of pain and it's not easy getting the point forth without it sounding a little clique.. This poem, I think, is pure emotions and no clique at all. Love it.

*BrokenToy

Very well done the emotion was very blatant

Wow - a very powerful, engaging poem! The last two lines are simple yet effective.

LOVED IT !!!!!!
You did really good on this poem

~Mz.Raven