New Morning (tanka)

by JL   Mar 27, 2006


On a cool morning
I see the sun rising slow
Vibrant colors shown
Ranging from pink to orange
Truly natures best secret

*This is my first attempt, I hope I got the syllables right*

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  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    I Agree With Angie, You Are a Remarkable Writer, And We Would Be Honored To Have You Join CCP (Coffee Conversation And Poetry) You Seem To Have The Star Quality In Poetry That Would Fit Right In With This Club (If Your Not Already Apart Of 1) 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    You did a beautiful job on this tanka and the count is correct........ I love it, I've watched many sunrises living here on the beach, I couldn't have described it any better.......... beautiful!!

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

    Are you in any clubs on the site? If not and if you'd like to join one, check out ours "Coffee, Conversation and Poetry" we do all kinds of contests, we are writing in all different poetry forms and we chat and have fun..... if you'd like to join, just tell them I sent you.... I think it'd be lots of fun for you and a poetry learning experience too!!!!

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