You did a beautiful job on this tanka and the count is correct........ I love it, I've watched many sunrises living here on the beach, I couldn't have described it any better.......... beautiful!!

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Are you in any clubs on the site? If not and if you'd like to join one, check out ours "Coffee, Conversation and Poetry" we do all kinds of contests, we are writing in all different poetry forms and we chat and have fun..... if you'd like to join, just tell them I sent you.... I think it'd be lots of fun for you and a poetry learning experience too!!!!

I Agree With Angie, You Are a Remarkable Writer, And We Would Be Honored To Have You Join CCP (Coffee Conversation And Poetry) You Seem To Have The Star Quality In Poetry That Would Fit Right In With This Club (If Your Not Already Apart Of 1) 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo