Things you do

by amy   Mar 28, 2006


Sometimes at night when i think to myself i ask myself why do i love you and i start to smile cause i know the list to could run for miles the whisper of your voice the warmth of your touch the little things that make me love you the way that you and help me with my feelings the way tat you care and show such a devotion the way that your kiss fills me with desire and how you hold me with the warmth of a blazing fire you help me win things go wrong you sing to me my favorite song and you make me feel like a princess and you take me in a whole new world the way your eyes shine when you look at me lost with you forever is where i want to be the way that i feel when your by my side a sense of completion and over flowing pride the dreams that i dream that all involve you the possibilities i see things we can do how you finish the puzzle that lies inside my heart how that deep in my soul you are the most important part i could go for days telling of what i feel but all you really must know is my love for you is real....

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Ok loved it but this is one HUGE run on sentance lol how about commas...lol AOther than that i totally dig it way to go!! :)

    always lissa