A brilliant idea there, I love the way you use the colours. And yes, you spell colours like that, legacy of English rule, meh heh heh.

There are a few things I didn't really understand, I'm guessing that's because I'm not the poet...
Such as "I have eluded their capture" and "oh colours, why have you abandoned me?" - indeed, two opposite ideas there.

Anyway, it is a good poem, and as I said before, I was very taken with the idea of the use of colours. I also liked the way it's presented in your poem.

Nice work.

I really like this! But I cannot help but think it's refering to humanity, not just colors. I get that from the first stanza. Either way, it's a great poem. I really like it =]

I love the way you created the imagery and then you took all of the pretty pictures away from the mind and filled it with the darkness of emptiness....great job.... alot of talent
~*~courtney~*~