I know it ant the "best" i can do but just really cant write lately..ne wayz hope it ant 2 bad..tell me if u find sumthing u dont really like or if i misses sumthing

From what you have...Excellent Job
You should of Just made it into a Stanza of Four..It would have looked nicer..and to make it longer
This poem was So Amazing
There should be more of it
Great job
5/5
~TPOMH~