I think everyone feels like that some more than others, but you expressed yourself well, I don't mind the grammer either.

I feel sometimes the anger and resentment beneath the poem can be so strong that it ruins the quality of what is being written. Watch out for some dodgy character...interestin stuff..

[lostlaureate - come find me]

WOW that was more intense than I thought agian ur talented and so young...better than me?? I think you are anyways...

I am sry you have to put up with this crap and that it causes gaps in your life that aint right..you try telln ur mom? well either way i hope this gets better...hang on to ur gurl when things get tough....

lataz
lissa

That sux and im srry lots...i liked the way u talked to ur mom and expressed your frustration w/ such a variety of words...ur comments mean so much to me so thx...
p.s. if u ever stop writing im coming to conneticut to get u!! LOL... hahahaha im so funny...i kno ima dork u dont hav to tell me,
love ya lots,
sore

Your words...well some just stood out more than others yet there were a few in some rough places that didn't exactly heighten the suspense. The piece was very intense and there were some great lines.
~S3I -Faith