The curtains close, and still no one knows....

by Tripp   Mar 28, 2006


In a horrible mood tonight...i decided that the least i could do this time was try to have proper grammar and such....

I'm neck high in depression

there isn't a strong enough expression

the emotion is rising,

impossible to begin surmising

my friends are what pull me back from the edge

stop me from hopping the ledge

two people stop me from the ultimate choice

the decision halted by the mere sound of their voice

Ivan M,

hes my brother till the end

and Becky my girlfriend

I'll love her forever, this feeling will never bend

without those two, I would surely have been gone by now

be like the performer at the end of an act, and bow

the curtains close

and still, no one knows....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    I liked it .. but i think it needs to be longer maybe.. i kinda feel likes it just scratched the surface.. but other than that its really good.. Keep it up!!

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    AWW so sad hang in their...and yes peopel do know...i understand...more people know then u think..yet they dont os i hear yax'..most my sad poems i make up lie kgood-bye good-bye but yea sumitmesi have felt lie kthe sdad poems i write so they seem so real but i am actualyl rly happy please kep read ign as many as u cna..some at the bottoem are good too i rly enjoyed this wonderful expression......

    lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Nice rhyming. You seem to have alot of bad moods!! Good stuff though.

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    Wow i just realized how short this is...oh well. i wish i had made it longer

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