Wow i just realized how short this is...oh well. i wish i had made it longer

Nice rhyming. You seem to have alot of bad moods!! Good stuff though.

[lostlaureate - come find me]

AWW so sad hang in their...and yes peopel do know...i understand...more people know then u think..yet they dont os i hear yax'..most my sad poems i make up lie kgood-bye good-bye but yea sumitmesi have felt lie kthe sdad poems i write so they seem so real but i am actualyl rly happy please kep read ign as many as u cna..some at the bottoem are good too i rly enjoyed this wonderful expression......

lissa

I liked it .. but i think it needs to be longer maybe.. i kinda feel likes it just scratched the surface.. but other than that its really good.. Keep it up!!

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