by Kenshin Mar 28, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Triggered by a small chain reaction, |
by HOLLY ARMER
Great job! I like how you wrote this. It's quick and straight to the point. Take care and keep it up~Holly |
by David
Short, sweet and to the point. The quick hitting, devastating message reflects the terrible power of a bomb like that, and thus I thought it was fitting. A little more elaboration and this poem would have been a five for sure. |