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by Melissa May LEE   Mar 28, 2006


Below my deep emotions,
i lay soft and still,
for my last breath,
my last precious will.

As i enter what i've never before,
I look upon my death,
i see it,
i see it all.

Could i say Goodbye?
to everything i ever had,
i think to me,
its not depression I'm just sad.

As i shut my eyes,
a curtain of darkness draws,
I'm tired i said,
i heard my name call.

I'm going to stand strong,
I'm not going to loose again,
i shall smile,
nothing will go wrong.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "i think to me,"
    should be 'myself' instead of 'me'
    ~~~
    "its not depression I'm just sad."
    it's should have an apostrophe
    ~~~
    "I'm not going to loose again,"
    should be lose,not loose.
    ~~~
    I think it could have ended stronger, but was a good emotional piece.