The Phoenix

by Bethan   Mar 28, 2006


The phoenix rises gracefully from the ashes,
Reincarnated, renewed, restored, reborn
Golden hues, jewel-like red and amber flashes,
Richly plumed, flaming colours ripple and adorn.

As if her very plumage is burning, alight,
Colours dance as if alive, her movements so spry,
Her form like a comet as she takes her flight,
Aflame, her blazing trails streak the night sky,

A harmonious melody escapes her beak as she soars,
A melodic symphony expressing her exhilaration,
An enchanting sound, such clarity, so clean and so pure,
She has risen joyous in transformation,

Her flight now over, she rests on tree-top canopies,
Feelings of elation departed, expended and replaced,
She can find true happiness yet cannot share her abilities,
Full of Sorrow as a single tear trickles down her face

The phoenix has but one night on this earth,
This mythical creature so beautiful, so benign
So wise she knows our sorrows from birth,
She is a being that is truly divine

She has one night to let us see true beauty,
On earth, she is touched by our distress,
She represents hope and to restore this, her duty,
Her tears flow for she is never a success,

Still she undertakes her task with passion and devotion
Till dawn she sings her bittersweet lament,
Sorrow and despair her song embodies these emotions,
At sunrise, she falls silent, her spirit spent

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem is excellently written. Imagery is great and atmosphere that you created is superb. I like the topic and this piece is also unique. It really deserves 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Charles

    WOW!!! oh my golly golly gosh. u really are a gr8 poet, i actually didnt want the poem to end. the imagery of the phoenix was brill. i love that animal even though it is mythical. the way u highlighted its features and attrubutes was.................... soooooo damm good. well done love
    chukx

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I must be stupid because i just got lost. i just couldn't keep up. maybe it's too many big/intelligent words. i'm sorry i'm too stupid to understand. i think it was just too much put into each line. but hey, what do i know, my poems are just simple and well...crap of recent.

    Brad

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    W0w man that was really g0od a great use 0f w0rds in this piece. p0werful