W0w man that was really g0od a great use 0f w0rds in this piece. p0werful

I must be stupid because i just got lost. i just couldn't keep up. maybe it's too many big/intelligent words. i'm sorry i'm too stupid to understand. i think it was just too much put into each line. but hey, what do i know, my poems are just simple and well...crap of recent.

Brad

WOW!!! oh my golly golly gosh. u really are a gr8 poet, i actually didnt want the poem to end. the imagery of the phoenix was brill. i love that animal even though it is mythical. the way u highlighted its features and attrubutes was.................... soooooo damm good. well done love
chukx

This poem is excellently written. Imagery is great and atmosphere that you created is superb. I like the topic and this piece is also unique. It really deserves 5/5