Hey, i hope its just words and some agrression, hope everything is fine, if in case u need something to hold on then just read a beautiful poem (My Unbeatable Faith), u hv all the answers in that. |
by Autuumnbree
A deep and well put poems, but with a little advice review your work be for submit it. Again very good poem....NJ |
by Latasha
Very cute poem good work |
by bOlly danCer
Awww thats so sad to hear. |
by sarah
Sad but great def another 5/5, all your poems are fantastic I love the way you word them keep them coming hun and take care sarah x |
Awesome Poem. Very well written. All I have to say is don't you slang terminology. instead of using u or r, use you or are. also use apostropy's when need. other than that awesome poem. |
Very nice poem, many people can relate to that kind of relationship. I like the pictures you used: uprooting the relationship, love from a stone, etc. |
by PURE HEART
Thanks for your suggestion -Joe and Ann. now i have sucessfully edited it. |
by Adriana
This poem is the best poem ever.. you really poured you heart out on this one...good job |