Comments : Biggest mistake...

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey, i hope its just words and some agrression, hope everything is fine, if in case u need something to hold on then just read a beautiful poem (My Unbeatable Faith), u hv all the answers in that.

    stay strong and take care of urself

  • 18 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    A deep and well put poems, but with a little advice review your work be for submit it. Again very good poem....NJ

  • 18 years ago

    by Latasha

    Very cute poem good work

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Awww thats so sad to hear.
    but hey wateva happins,happins for a good reason....sp smile and be happy you lost nothing.....the person that took u for granted lost everything.
    5/5......very strong and i liked it alot.

    :) tkcare.

    sonam

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Sad but great def another 5/5, all your poems are fantastic I love the way you word them keep them coming hun and take care sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Awesome Poem. Very well written. All I have to say is don't you slang terminology. instead of using u or r, use you or are. also use apostropy's when need. other than that awesome poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Very nice poem, many people can relate to that kind of relationship. I like the pictures you used: uprooting the relationship, love from a stone, etc.

    Since you have it in the love section, you should go through and write out all the shortcuts (u, r, 4) unless you want to put it in the slang section.

    Good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Thanks for your suggestion -Joe and Ann. now i have sucessfully edited it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Adriana

    This poem is the best poem ever.. you really poured you heart out on this one...good job