You are a good writer, I like the way you make the words rhyme. You keep on writing more like these, and I'll keep on read them.
-Peace

Beautiful writing :) I love your poem, I love the rhyme and the way this poem flows :) Lucky Steve ;) I wish you guys the best.

i can totally relate to this poem!!
youre such a great writer!
take care
MeL

Very nicely done!!!

Nice poem! Love It!!