Never read a civil war poem before and it's different. Best one I read from you so far with the imagery and I hope you keep writing.

Its really good... you have talent
keep it up!

cler

Great imagery used, you may want to correct a spelling mistake 'But it lands upon def ears' Is the def meant to be deaf? Anyway great poem!

Great - you actually take heed of peoples spelling corrections :) Thats already impressed me, as most people just leave it. It means you can take a little criticism . . . Well . . . there isn't any of that, so I may as well just get on with praising your beautiful work!

Peace. [Sole]

This is a really good poem...especially since it was one you HAD to write. I have some poems I've been assigned, but usually they're not as good cause I don't really have inspiration to write them.

You did good with this write, it gave me chills :) 5/5

I really like it. basically the whole thing is very good. except for "And see my best friend's attempted retreat" to me it doesnt flow with the rest of the stanza. besides that awesome.

Amazing peice, the flow is smooth and consistant the peice runs well thoughout. the imegry and descriptions are fantastic and the overall peice quite original. as it is a peice you had to write for a class it is even more impresive, or at least it s to me as i could never write a poem on command.

5/5