Awe so sad :( I loved your rhyming and how nice every word fit together. I also liked how you seem to have such a unique way with words! The third stanza was a bit of the flow... But all around a nice write!

I agree with you. Thank goodness this wasn't another "self-harm", I sense a magical theme about the poem and this excites me, I love your use of ambiguity....!!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Really nice poem, i like the rhymes
first and second part is awesome, last a bit worse in my opinion, but still nice;)

anwyay i like it.

I liked this poem, shows alot of emotion, however your comment at the end runied it for me. to me, poems are a way of expressing feelings, which you do very well in other peoms, 'any last wishes' for example. it saddened me to see you degrading poems written about self harm. as often its the best way for that person to let out their emotions. maybe im commenting from an extreme point of view, but to me, my poems are a way to NOT self harm.
otherwise very good work, i love the way you write.