Watch myself bleed..

by ShelovesmeNOT   Mar 28, 2006


Fighting against breath...
crawling towards death..
getting sick of this life,
i pick up a fukin knife...
As i place it on my skin i begin to creed,
and as it strts to slide i cant help watch myself bleed...

leave comment... :$ im new to this ... i duno how it is ...
thnx wud appreciate

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  • 18 years ago

    by stacey ohara

    Loved the way you put this together love. x

  • 18 years ago

    by velvet kissesâ„¢

    Hey dude, thts v.gd specially tht u've just startd... keep writing (f)

  • 18 years ago

    by MethodtotheMadness

    I'd say good job. and thank you for the comment you wrote me. I appreciate it.

  • 18 years ago

    by tiffanny

    This is very good.i hope to read more of your work.

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Great poem love the wording keep writing and take care hun sarah x

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