White ash

by SEAN   Mar 28, 2006


A surrender

the girl will return home
in gigantic monsters and machines
to each victim they own
secrets reveal an ugly time for release

a mourning

you cant just expect a welcome
not after all thats been
take control of this pointless persistence
an pass the gun to me

just try to open your eyes
and change with a chance
keep it together for them
fight the hurt with a song or a dance

now your healing how do you feel
theres color in your heart
and theres love in your energy
doing everything i cant

begin a day with someone special
an smile at what lasts
and be thankful for the thought
your never going back

I'm glad for what you achieved
you gave strength to the weakest part of me....................................the end

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bri

    I love this perspective also, on the soldiers of war. That's what I took from this, anyway. Gosh, you have such beautiful lines! I get jealous sometimes of your writing lol. Excellent. Positively amazing.. there's not much more to say.

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Me

    Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by blue eyed brat

    I liked that poem. it seems to have a lot of meaning in it. keep up the gud work.