Death~~~

by dark_winged_angel   Mar 29, 2006


Came in a limo,
left in a hearse.
the second is always
the worst verse.
I'm losing my favorite game,
I'm losing the most dangerous game.
playing for hearts,
not for fame.
faith,
trust,
were all caught,
relief is naught,
relief is not.
but death,...
misery till the last breath,
live to cry,
die to die.

I'm new here so please tell me if you like it...
of course i don't post my really good ones but i like this one all the same.

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  • 18 years ago

    by dark_winged_angel

    TY every1 4 ur commentz i rlly appreciate them, they atleast tell me i have a sllight talent -smirk-

  • 18 years ago

    by Si Chotic

    I really like it.Well written

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    I liked it too. i thought the simplicity and shortness of the lines made it easy to read and the general theme was kool.
    Thanks for commenting on my poem "the pencil that brojke my heart" it meant heaps. Rock on!
    -Suzie