by Bridgette
I really like this poem! its crazy how i can completely relate to it! but its really good! 5/5* |
by Dark Kitten
"I'm as flimsy as a plastic butter knife." a very interesting and original simile. |
by Lisa
Oh wow i loved this poem, especially the ending its so sad, someone filled with regret for what they never gave in a relationship. Fantastic write. |
The descriptions are very original, I really like them. I love the whole message, and the way your poem is written. |
Your flawles flow delivered your message eloquently |
by Misstress
One of your best.. |
by Ellie
Aw, I feel so very sorry for the person this was written for. But it was a lovely way of putting it, all the same. :-) |