Comments : God, Know That Im Trying

  • 18 years ago

    by peculiargirl

    That is sooo pretty!! God loves you!! :D

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "I thirst for you
    Like a flower thirsts for water
    I need you
    Like a child needs its father"

    Love how you used similes throughout, imagery is great! Really beautiful poem. In life the only person you can be is yourself, you've just have to think that you are who you are and know that if there is a God, he would love you no matter what.

    Take Care.