My online crush

(not all done but this is what I have so far)***plz rate and Ill love you more than yesterday*** hehe no J/K but I really wanna know what youll think so if you can plz take a second and rate my poem

It all began with an A/S/L
Conversation was going very well
You told me a little about you
I began to think is all this shit true
Every previous girl you had cheated on you
It was you who they had mistreated
I could not seem to believe
That it was you who they would deceive
I said I would never be unfaithful
It is all about being faithful
We talked for hours about our thoughts
And all the problems we had fought
Days and months went by
Ever since the first day you had caught my eye
Then one day you got online and told me
\"Hey I think I have found somebody\"
I thought to myself \"God How Could He\"
When I heard those words you made me cry
I felt my mouth go dry
I began to tell you how I really felt for you
Then my few tears became more and more
In my heart I felt a huge sore
Every word I had said to you had been true
Those were my total feelings for you
All you could type back was \"I\'m Sorry\"
You also said, \"You could find someone don\'t worry\"
From that point on we started to talk less
To me this drama seemed like a mess
All I felt was a bunch of stress
Some more months and days went by
Every night it was me who you could hear cry

**if you can plz tell me what you think it can be either + or - well rate me how you think i did luv maria)**