Thats a friggin awesome poem!!! i loved it oh and i took your comment virginity lol! well keep up the good work!! love ya lol bye!

If you love something *good not that bad stuff lol* then I think it's worth fighting for. For me that
s writing ;)

I think the flow was off in about two stanza's. Forgot to copy which ones but it threw off the balance. The rest of it was organized well. The ending wrapped the whole poem together and the title drew my attention to this one in the first place. 4/5