Awh, lol, that was cute! I loved the last stanza as that was quite comical! The flow was good, as were your rhymes.. The descriptions were great too! And I loved the emotion you put into it..

Like my heart is fluttering like a dove.
^ Don't use "Like" twice in the same line..

Nicely done sweetie, keep it up! 5/5

Hey great first poem. i should have read this earlier. well done. i know who you are writing about. lol. butterflies. lol.

excellent. 5/5 David