I like your poem it was great. I hope you and your friend work everything out.
Keep writting your great at it.
Lauren

Yes, evryone has let me down and i kno wut that fels like...its one of the lowest emotions ever...u can semi-expect any other guy to let u down but when a girlfriend does it hurts....hurts ore than words can decribe.... i hope evrything is working out for you...keep writing u hav a lot of developing to do but a lot of skill to do it!thx for ur comments,
love ya lots,
sore