The one

by gemowski   Mar 29, 2006


There you are fast asleep,
i can not help but take a peek,
you so peaceful lying there,
your chest an legs are oh so bare,

i can feel it yes its there,
this special feelings in the air,

you're my heart, you're my fire,
the one that i desire

your the one

gemma claire parkes

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Try going into more details emotionally and descriptive to paint us a visual. Imagine how you feel or if this person was there with you at that moment or you were speaking only to them. Just some tips. Enjoy :)

  • 18 years ago

    by gemowski

    Hi everyone one i hope yo like my poem. it my first tim ive tried any thing like this,
    i know the ending isnt very good,
    but im tryin

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