I know it's hard

by Erikah   Mar 29, 2006


I know its hard sometimes,
cuz life isn't always as it seems.
Your life could end tomorrow,
in one of your faintness dreams.

Tho no one could be as selfish
than to take there own life.
I despise a person who cuts their self with a sharp razor knife

If you were to die today,
I KNOW you'd surely be missed.
Even if you feel you have no one,
there's always that one person that would be pissed.

Not pissed at you
but at the fact that you'd died.
You're thinking if only they knew how much people've hurt your pride.

I know it's hard to live in a world of fear.
Not knowing who loves you in your dearest years.

If you end your life now
that wouldn't solve a thing.
You're going to go to hell,
it's in the bible from the King.

You'll die in dear time when the time is right,
you didn't make yourself,
so don't pick up that knife.

Even though it's hard
wait a while longer.
I promise you'll be happy and get a little stronger.

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  • 17 years ago

    by <3Everyones~Outcast<3

    I like this poem alot it makes me realise that suicide will never be an option its, awesome!

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey,
    i really liked the message your trying to send out with this poem. But depression is an illness... inside suicide is never the answer yet sometimes it feels like the only way to well escape. like the end stanza, that just seems really impossible for many people out there.
    Anywyas ill talk about the acctual poem now, it has a good flow, and the rhymes were ok. Some of them i just think you wanted them to rhyme and couldnt think of another word though. i htought you oculd of chnaged the structure a little, it owuld make it more appealing to the reader. The long lines, if you could split them into two or something? Still a good poem had an ok flow. keep writing! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Riley

    Wow dat was a good poem! if i was going to kill myself that poem would make me think twice.
    5/5 = )

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    Wow!
    that was really something!!

  • 18 years ago

    by weslo

    You poem is very nice, but most of all motavating. its like a anti sucide poem, i like that

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