Excellent

Yes this is excellent, the short lines are very effective, in ways i could never write!!

I realy, realy liked it!!

Jon
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(thankyou for your comment also.)

Hey!
I was all happy to see you had a new one!
So true, it,s kinda sad when you think about it though.
Once again I loved it!
luv ya-xxx-

This is sad but touching. i love it as always. you are an incredible writer mona!! i love all of your poems.

Wow!!
mona I've been away for awhile
and I come back and firstly go straight to your page as I love your written; once again you've smitten me with words!!
A nice welcome back to read your new stuff I hope I can get back into the swing of writing
well done
lovies to you xxxxxxxx mwah xxxxxxx

Mona sweetie!!!
wut a touching piece!!!
I luved it and I do luv ur work. u r so brilliant and I wish you the best it wud be!!!
than-Q huni for ur sweet comments I'm okay those weex r passing slowly but with my boyfriend I feel okay for sure!
Luv you always and forever
NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

Exactly this fear nice poem u should read my poem about fear except its a little longerthan yours any how nice poem 5/5 go fish bowl

KoOl. So awesome. this is my kind of poem. i LOVE it!

always, Suzie

Wow, this is fantastic! Love the rhyme, it made the whole poem flow flawlessly. Love the subject too, excellent write!

Loved it!

This poem was very true, and really good, i give it a 5/5 thanks for the comment on my poem. i think im going to add you to my favorites.

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this poem can't get any better

Very expressive...definitive! I just put you in my favorites. Can I get your comments on my stuff? I'm a rookie but would respect your opinion very much. Bravo!

So few words express so much. Excellent job on this, Mona!!

Alsome

Wow that waz a relli good poem uwrote

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BlEEdinhEarT911

Very nice poem. Sweet and simple.
Creative and very different. Awesome work. Keep writing!

Excellent- i loved it! very very good!

keep writing!

lonelynow xxx

Ur lyk a great writer!