by Sole Mar 29, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I'm punching through your oceans, but the tide will never turn |
by Tara Kay
It was great to read, it didnt flow too well but you can get a sense of power from it. xxx |
by PS
Wow this is beautiful.you use some great words and comparisons. i can feel the constant fighting against something. nice job! |
by Kaylee
The first two lines ran too long that it just seemed out of place. Try breaking them up because they really are great lines. I really liked the imagery of this poem more than your other poems. It felt more deep and emotional for some reason. |
That Was Beautiful The Way You Used Words That Aren't Used By Many Is Just Maraculous( If Its Spelt Right) I'm Speechless 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |
by azlan26
The first two lines threw me a bit |