by Kaylee Mar 29, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Walking; clicking; |
by Jonathan
Very nice poem... i could feel your fellings through the written word... very good... |
by amber
I love it you are a talented poet great job i totally understand it great job again |
by Dark Kitten
This was an interesting piece of work. The structure seemed original to me, and it was very refreshing. I liked the use of single words to show vibrant scenes. It was wonderfully done. |
Awesome, I loved it. You have this style of writting and using imagery that I like. Keep up the good work. |
by Laura
You have a beautiful way of expressing yourself. You can take a topic of sadness and turn it into a thing of beauty. 5/5 |