This is good you have the most elegant and unique imagery in all your poems I cannot fathom how you do it. Nice use of the semi-colons I felt this poem was alot more fluid than some of your other stuff I've read. Simply divine.

"Yet even still he steals
the curved angel wings from your back."

I love this bit...funnily enough it means a great deal to me right now.

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Awesome imagery, I really loved the single words they stood out so beautifully!

Peace. [Sole]

You incorrectly used semicolons, but I don't suppose that really matters all that much. As a general rules, semiscolons are used to connect two grammatically complete sentences that share a common message and theme. I liked how you chose two gerunds and connected them to a larger message concerning the pain you're feeling. I think that if I read this poem correctly, it is about the pain of losing a person you love (not necessarily through death, maybe a breakup) and the difficulty of accepting someone new. In any case it was a good poem.

This poem really blew me away. it is very well written & flows perfectly. you have amazing talent. great job! keep up the good work! 5/5**

This poem is amazing..... It can mean so many different things.... I loved how you compared your emotions to those of your surroundings!

Great poem. Your structure was different... I liked reading a differently structured poems as opposed to reading the traditional style. The idea in the poem is good. You had some amazing lines. Nice work 5/5

- Thanks for reading my poem -

~ Tina

I love all the imagery in this poem, makes a change to actually have a poet who knows how to use it :) Not that I expected much less
Another great poem :)

This is awsome, it's like delicate, elegant.. i dunno how to explain it... it owns a beautiful sadness that captivated me in some parts very strongly... i didn't like as much the end as i did of the rest of the poem. you've got a talented way of using words, and u're making a good use of it :)

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The unique and original style delivered the passion of your pen most eloquantly

The imagery was outstanding

You used really good imagery on this one. great.

Wow, its awesome, you are so talented
keep up the great work
love Tara-Kay

WOW...very sad. loved your choice of words. rythm was great nice write

5/5

~GLASS~

Amazing job with this one! I really love how you interconncet it with nature.. wow! Where do you get this insporation to write like this>This is truely a beautiful. wow this poem made my jaw drop. like wow lol.. great flow. AMAZING choice of words! Im speechless great job!

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WOW you have such a unique way of writing!! Your poems really stand out from any others!! Excellent job as always
5/5

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~!*Meaghen~!*

WOW you have such a unique way of writing!! Your poems really stand out from any others!! Excellent job as always
5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

I def like this. i love the unique imagery and style that you use. i love it. and the words with the semicolons were nice

I liked this! It was good!! It had alot of meaning within in, And i liked that! Keep up the great work :P

luv natalie x0x0x

You have a beautiful way of expressing yourself. You can take a topic of sadness and turn it into a thing of beauty. 5/5

Awesome, I loved it. You have this style of writting and using imagery that I like. Keep up the good work.

This was an interesting piece of work. The structure seemed original to me, and it was very refreshing. I liked the use of single words to show vibrant scenes. It was wonderfully done.