Hmmmm a good write! 5/5 hun x

Wow. this is amazing. the first stanza really reminds me of what i'm going through. wanting to change myself so i could possiby be happy.
this certainly deserves a way higher rating than 5. it's just so...beautifully written. there are no words to describe what i feel for this.
just. amazing.
lauren

Great imagery and rhtythm to this one adn the rhyming fitted perfectly, i also liked the repetition of 'someone' it made the tone very 'down-to-earth' xx

This is soooo good.
I dont think theres anything bad about this poem it was so good.
your flow was like perfect and your imagry was amazing and i loved everything bout it.

Wow. Awesome poem. I really felt the depth - you have a great technique. Keep up the excellent work.

Peace. [Sole]

Some of the words kinda screwed with the flow in the second stanza made it sound a little forced but overall it was really good. I loved the words which gave it a more vivid feel.
~Faith