I am sry your treaated that way..keep up the excellent poetry my friend..ur gettn better yet!

ur friend
lissa

Hello clvr bunni!
hehe! i am tlkn 2 u rite now but thought it wud be rude not to put a messege on here................................. u r unique hun and anyone who thinks ur too diffeent r asses! luff ya hunni!
luv the obbesed cookie dough eater! hehe xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Strong emotions there my friend, also I used to be a goth but now I just research into it. Hence me showing pointing out the flaw within the religious talk. You keep writing and as it will develop into something very powerful. Also use a dictionary and learn new words has help me to make my work stronger by having a strong vocab and crafting words in certain ways. Paul :)

Damn right - and what can we do about it? I'm here if you want to talk

manta_grommet@hotmail.co.uk

Beautifully written poem all the same - strong and emotional.

Peace. [Sole]