Sad sad poem...wrote it about someone I know...

The girl is cryin
the guy is smilin
the heart is breaking
as the body is aching
the soul is put on fire
since he was her last and only desire
she trys to talk to him when he walks by
but another day she has failed attempt to try
the lonely heart is as cold and lonely
the guy she loves dearly is
the one and only...

Plzz rate for me...I havent been posting any new ones up for a while cuz i havent been on here...
so yeah!! tell me what ya think too!!