by Kaylalala Mar 30, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
We live a life of dispare |
by krysten
I liked it although it was confusing for me too. I liked the ryhming an it was set up really nice. |
by ~*Layna*~
This was nice...lol. Hey...Im sitting right next to you. Dont look at me. Hey turn yourslef. QUIT LOOKING AT ME. Anyway about the poem. It was good. It was good. But listen I didn't like the rhyming pattern. It was too strong. I told you that because you are my best friend and I thought that you could handle it. OKAY BYE BYE! BYE NOW! OKAY...BYE! |
by Jackie Marie
That was confusing! but i like it |