Phantom Love

by Twisted Heart   Mar 30, 2006


There's someone who visits me
At night when I'm asleep
He holds me close and comforts me
While I wrestle with the sheets.
His touch is undemanding
It's gentle as can be
His kisses reaching deep inside
And holding on to me.
He brings me to the edge of life
And takes me back again
He often takes me places
I have never been.
I reach for him and hold him close
So close I cannot see
That he is just a phantom
Who's love is touching me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Jeannie my dear, your imagination is really rather unique! lovely style, lovely bit of poetry.

    thanks very much Jeannie for your comments and encouragement to write. your comments mean a lot to me

    love and peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Puerto_Rican_Chick

    "...I reach for him and hold him close
    So close I cannot see
    That he is just a phantom
    Who's love is touching me."

    thats how im sorta feeling right now about a special someone. i think you did a great job over all on the poem. it had good flow. propz. 5/5

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