"...I reach for him and hold him close
So close I cannot see
That he is just a phantom
Who's love is touching me."

thats how im sorta feeling right now about a special someone. i think you did a great job over all on the poem. it had good flow. propz. 5/5

Jeannie my dear, your imagination is really rather unique! lovely style, lovely bit of poetry.

thanks very much Jeannie for your comments and encouragement to write. your comments mean a lot to me

love and peace
shobhana