I wish I could write like that. Whenever I write I find I keep rhyming the same words at the end of my sentences. This is truly one of the only poems that's made me think on my writing style. Thank You:)
-Blacksand

Really well written, i love it
take care x0x0

Very good, I love reading some of you're poems, you are very good, it'd be great if you could leave me some comments on some of my new poems, thanks :)