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by Boogie Mar 30, 2006 category : Love, romance / i love you
You appeared out of nowhere You proved to me that you really care You said you loved my hair You said you had a crush on me for two years now You help me get rid of my heartbroken frown You made me feel so special You said you wanted me forever You told me the sweetest words ever You got me thinking of you everyday You didnt remain that way You now sometimes forget me for a whole day You then make up excuses for why you were away You always find a way to make me say "its okay" You constantly lie about calling me back You make me stay up all night listening to tupac You got me believing that you really will call back You also yell at me when Im in tears You got me suffering in pain more than my past years You say Im always ignoring you You know Im quite when Im crying because of you You now hardly have anytime for me You just talk for 5 minutes and then hang up on me You then go on about how much you miss me You know thats nothing but bullshit You still keep on pretending like you really mean it You really expect me to believe it? You say you love me more than before Is this the way you treat someone you adore?!
by Boogie
Thanks for the opinion :)
by Erikah
I think that this should have a rhyme scheme. You have one, but it isn't constant, but other than that, its good.